[george mason university]

STEP 3.9d Paz
July 22nd, 2010


OCTAVIO PAZ
Between Going and Staying
Between going and staying the day wavers,
in love with its own transparency.
The circular afternoon is now a bay
where the world in stillness rocks.
All is visible and all elusive,
all is near and can't be touched.
Paper, book, pencil, glass,
rest in the shade of their names.
Time throbbing in my temples repeats
the same unchanging syllable of blood.
The light turns the indifferent wall
into a ghostly theater of reflections.
I find myself in the middle of an eye,
watching myself in its blank stare.
The moment scatters. Motionless,
I stay and go: I am a pause.

PROMPT

Write a ghazal where you preserve one word from the first line of Paz’s “Between Going and Staying”. The word can be from any part of the line, so it’s really something of a loose scaffold.

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